I thought this next section was suffering from mild fragmentosis. But when I went to stitch up the holes, I wound up with a massive amount more than I expected. Big bunny.
There isn't actually a scene break between the previous installment and this. I thought there might be, and so I posted that much, but then the bunny took...well, not a sharp right, more like a very blunt right, but it didn't do quite what I thought it might there.
This fic has acquired its final rating. (I wasn't sure for a while whether they'd actually do full-blown smut.) NC-17 for slash, sex, bondage, D/s, and general kinkiness. But what can you expect? They're twisted little bastards. And long-winded.
*burbles* God, I've missed posting first drafts. It's not something you can get away with on FictionAlley, but it was my preferred method of posting for my other fandom, and there's a certain vicarious thrill to it that I should probably wean myself of for the sake of my readers. *sighs* It's just so hard to gestate something when nobody's read it.
Anyway. Squeal if you like it, squawk if it could be better, and bumble off if it's not your thing.
( Within These Pages... )
There isn't actually a scene break between the previous installment and this. I thought there might be, and so I posted that much, but then the bunny took...well, not a sharp right, more like a very blunt right, but it didn't do quite what I thought it might there.
This fic has acquired its final rating. (I wasn't sure for a while whether they'd actually do full-blown smut.) NC-17 for slash, sex, bondage, D/s, and general kinkiness. But what can you expect? They're twisted little bastards. And long-winded.
*burbles* God, I've missed posting first drafts. It's not something you can get away with on FictionAlley, but it was my preferred method of posting for my other fandom, and there's a certain vicarious thrill to it that I should probably wean myself of for the sake of my readers. *sighs* It's just so hard to gestate something when nobody's read it.
Anyway. Squeal if you like it, squawk if it could be better, and bumble off if it's not your thing.
( Within These Pages... )