More drabbles.

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rabican (Salazar/Godric; eeeeh...whatever you want; can Godric be sub? Sub!Godric is entertaining.), it is written. You got a bit shortchanged though; I decided to try nanofiction.

Creating Salt

One would not think slender Salazar, slant-voiced swamp wastrel, could make a warrior cry. One would not think muscle-hewn Godric would let him. But that was the way, for both of them.

That was power: making the lion-voiced man beg. Godric's eyes would water when Salazar took him. Tears and sweat--power, salt on his tongue.

~~~

nicolae (Tom Riddle; post-killing Myrtle), it is written. Disciplined myself again; a pure-blood drabble here. They're hard.

[untitled]

He had not meant to kill her. Not that he minded. She was a Mudblood, after all.

There was something pathetic about her, statue-still against the wall of her toilet, eyes wide behind coke-bottle glasses, dumpy little face forever frozen in confusion.

So this was Salazar Slytherin's great work--little girls in bathrooms. A basilisk to kill her was a boulder for an ant. She should have died screaming, should have known the agony he'd endured at the hands of Muggles. But she will merely whine forever, uninitiated to true pain.

He took her wand and left, without closing her eyes.

~~~

icarusancalion (Slimy!Draco/Confused!Ron; someplace sleazy--bathroom stall on Hogwarts Express?; Ron wins in the end. *ahem*), it is written. Look at me, I used the dialogue gimmick. Also gratuitous undefined blackmail as plot device, non-con, and use of penis pain for slapstick porpoises. *facepalms*

Pissing on the Tracks

"I've always liked pissing on a moving train, you know. Even if it isn't the old kind, where it's just a hole down to the tracks. It's adventurous, it's satisfying. So I think I'll like coming in here even more."

"What?!"

"Oh, come on, Ronniekins. Didn't your father ever tell you not to let a Malfoy blackmail you? We ask the most outrageous things. Here."

"The hell? Put that thing away!"

"Of course, you're not going to come. Just me."

"Why would I want to, anyway?"

"Stop sulking and suck."

"What the--it's not--I'm not--"

"Would you rather I used the other hole and left you in here with your arse in the air? Oh, stop sputtering. You sound like some infernal Muggle machine. Get on your knees."

"I'm not going to fit."

"I have no intention of letting you try to get inside me, Weasley."

"I mean in this sodding stall you impossible stuck-up mmmph! OW! Gerrofme!"

"Better?"

"I can't move."

"That's the point."

"My foot's falling asleep."

"Already? We haven't even started."

"My trousers are wet."

"Dear me. Some firstie must have missed."

"MALFOY!!"

"Somebody's going to hear you, and you wouldn't want to give anyone the impression there are two of us, eh?"

"...fucking bastard..."

"I never said this was going to be comfortable. Open wide."

"I don't know--glerk!"

"Ah, such lovely indignity. It would help if you moved your tongue down...use your lips, not your teeth...to the right, now...not the tee--YEOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!! STOP BITING YOU SODDING--gerrof, gerrof, I--"

"Get your fucking foot out of my--OW!"

"Eek."

"Um...hi, Harry..."

"Er, Ron, dare I ask why you and Malfoy just fell out of the bathroom?"

"No."

"And why he's scampering off clutching his trousers?"

"No."

"And why he screamed in mortal agony?"

"No."

"Ron, did you bite Malfoy's...er..."

"Yes. And I should've bit harder."

"Er..."

~~~

And that's all for now, unless I get more.

So which one should I use for my hpdrabble application? ;-)

Comments

God I love Ron...

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

Best lines:

"Dear me. Some firstie must have missed."

"Oh, come on, Ronniekins. Didn't your father ever tell you not to let a Malfoy blackmail you? We ask the most outrageous things. Here."

I have a feeling Ron's gonna pay for this later...

:D Icarus

Best one?

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

The Myrtle one is good, but your dialogue for "Pissing on the Train" is priceless. I think that's the one to use.

~Icarus

[darkrosetiger.livejournal.com]

Mmmm. I liked them all, but I'm going to have to vote for "Pissing on the Train."

I have to admit that I find the whole "drabble" thing intensely frustrating. I keep wanting more. Greedy, aren't I?

[wired-lizard.livejournal.com]

It's as bad for the writer, trust me. ;-)

Now to actually settle on a title...Pissing on the Train, Pissing on the Tracks. Stupid brain cramps.

(I think it was originally tracks, but I like train better.)

re: Draco blackmailing Ron drabble

[hohaiyee.livejournal.com]

Silly boy, use the lock-jaw jinx first!